print study, fall 2005

Not much to say here. I like the angles. It needs stronger tonal range but more as time passes. It's a little flat. Not sure where to fix it though.

Dave's comments:
I love the moment captured in this one. The balance of the three men works. I do wish one of them was dominate. Maybe looking at the camera to give us a personal connection to the scene that is unfolding. Wait for that decisive moment.

Guy on the left merges with the building, and I find that distracting. Lean to the left, and get him out of the trees. Then the lighter gray will frame the darker gray and give more separation.

Biggest issue… the connection. Pull the viewer into the picture by waiting until that human connection is there.

mtbbrian's comments:
I like the this one becuase of the interesting action going on with the three guys on stilts. The building kind of keeps your eye down towards them, Iam not sure if it's the lines, it's size or position in the frame.

Gordon's Comments:
I kind of like the tall guys loping around too but more because the subject has the circus sort of appeal kind of gets my attention than any type of particular sophistication of the image.

londhair's comments:
Stilts- This I think I would like better if shot form a slightly lower angle so that they and the building seemed taller- like exaggerated more than beingon stilts already is. Also it would be better with hte current picture if you tried to bring the subjects out a bit more, they kind of blend into the building.